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Thursday, October 7, 2010

OUR FUTURE


OUR FUTURE
“Hurry up, son! You’re gonna be late for work and we won’t be able to find enough oil for today” – shouts the Father, and he flee out of the old wooden door for his daily work at the dirty diamond mine not far from their old house.
“June 17th, 2510,
Just another day of hard working but still no food…..” The Son closes his diary and jumps down the archaic floor that had broken for years even before he was born, and almost fall. He’s a fine young man, at the start of his twenties. He has beautiful blonde hair like his mother, big, blue eyes like his father. He is the strongest kid in the whole village, he’s always the winner in those muscle contests.
“Wait son, you forgot your lunch box, AGAIN!” The Mother calls out to her son with a tired voice from their small kitchen at the back of the house.
“Thanks, mom! Take care, don’t work too hard or you’ll get sicker. We’ll bring you some good food today for you to improve your health.” The Son talks softly to his little mother. He smiles to her, takes her hand, kisses it, takes his lunch box and runs after his dad. He doesn’t know that is the last time he would ever see her alive again.
They are living in the year 2510 of the future, at a place called Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. In the past few hundreds years, mankind had created robots that is as smart as people to provide enough workers for the population that is growing non-stop, but it was the stupidest idea of our children in the future.
….Year 2450, there was a mistake in the process of creates a mind for a kind of robots. They had to destroy and throw away a thousand robots of that kind, but they didn’t do it properly. Year 2455, in only 10 years, those robots raised, mesmerizes all kinds of robots to come together and they killed anyone who doesn’t obey and rebels against them….
The Son and his dad are working in the dirty diamond mine. This is a new mine of this area, they didn’t know there is oil here until the robots took over and forced them to dig to find oil. The Son stops digging, looks around, all he could sees is worried faces, dirty clothes, they all try to find as much diamond as they could for food. The funny thing is he’s doing it himself. He was lazy; he doesn’t want to touch or even walk into these dirty mine full of dirt. He had changed, because his dad couldn’t find enough food for his mom and himself when she became sick. He loves his mom a lot, so he begged his dad so he could work here and help him take care of his mom.
“STOP!!!!....” A voice of a robot suddenly brings him back to the mine, he looks up, all he could see is hatred, he curses them, and it is all their faults that his mom is sick.
“You” The robot points at him, he steps forward, all the other people around him look scares, and they don’t want to be involved, indeed they don’t, those robots are nothing but troubles and deaths.
 “Where’s your dad????”  “I don’t know” “Go look for that old man, fools, and keep the child here, don’t let him run away.” The robot in charged demanded his soldiers. The Son knows what’s going on, he tries to get away from those robots but couldn’t. He wanted to go home to find his mom; his dad can take care of himself but his mom…. She’s sick and weak.
“They caught him…” He thought sadly and looks at his dad but. He doesn’t know what they are going to do with his dad, but when he sees the Executed robot comes, he tries to get out of this robot’s hold and comes to save his dad, but no use. His dad was killed right in front of his eyes, he tries to look away, but the robot wouldn’t let him. He couldn’t see anymore, his eyes are blurry, full of tears, and he couldn’t remember the last time he cried. As soon as the robots release him, he runs as fast as he possibly could home, but all he could find is the bloody body of his mom. He couldn’t make any sounds but his tears just keep dropping. His whole body is shaking; he can’t even stand properly. He lost both of his mom and dad, now he’s all alone in this big world
 He stayed there for hours, looking at the bodies of his mom and dad that a good neighbor brought to him. He falls asleep, wakes up, sees the bodies, cries again, and then falls asleep again. After two days, he decides to bring the bodies into his backyard and buries them.
A month after that, he is like a walking mummy. His face is pale, he never speaks to anyone, and the tears keeps falling from his eyes, and he can’t stop them. From a nice, lovely young man who always likes to help others, now there’s nothing in him but hatred. He even planned to run right into those robots to revenge for his parents, he feels like there is a fire in him, encourages him, and gives him inspiration.
Then one day, a person comes and changes his life. He explains himself as part of the rebellions who are working to overthrow the evil rule of the robots. And he would like The Son to join him. “We need more people to get things done and ready for THAT DAY” The Guy says.
The Son thinks about his dad, his mom, and all the terrible things those robots have done to mankind, the people who are still have to live under the cruel rule and deaths. He decides he needs to help them, so he joins them. For months, he goes to work at the mine like nothing’s happening, and in there, he works with rebellions to dig a way into the head quarter of the robots. They also make weapons and persuade people to join them for a better future for mankind. By working with these people, it helps him forget about sadness and makes him fit in and create good relationships with others. 
“June 17th, 2515,
Today is the 5 years death ceremony of my parents and I’m going to revenge for them….”
“July 17th, 2515,
WE LOST!!!! Wait for me, mom, dad, I’m coming with you, and all my rebellions friends……”

Thursday, September 30, 2010

A Retrieved Reformation Vocabulary

  1. Rehabilitate - People who was released from prisons should try to rehabilitate to have a better life in society and people will forget that they committed crime.
  2. Clemency - His crime wasn't that bad, so the judge gave him clemency for telling the truth about it.
  3. Elusive - I have an elusive memory, I can hardly remember what happened in Mr. Blake's class at the end of the day.
  4. Anguish - My anguish after we lost the basketball game was so clear that people was scared of me.

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Writing Focus: Think as a Reader/ Writer

She was playing basketball with the boys in the schoolyard when her mom arrives to pick her up.  She ran to the fifth floor as fast as she could and came back in two minutes with her schoolbag and a bunch of heavy-looking books. Her mom gave her the helmet but she denied it with a tired, sleepy expression on her face. She was almost falling as sleep on their way home, but she was managed to over come and stay awake. And she fell asleep before she could finish all of her homework.

Monday, September 27, 2010

Weekend Homework


Dear Alex the Genius,
I am hosting a pool party at my house this weekend, which is in district 1, near to our school, and I would love to have you join with me. Don’t tell me, I know that you would probably say no, but let me tell you a few reasons why you shouldn’t miss my pool party. We have a lot of homework from our beloved teachers this weekend, so if you come to my house, we can do the homework together and still have fun. It is way better than staying home, trying to do that homework for all day long, which is BORING!!!! Many brains work better and faster than just one.
You’ll be staying at my home all day and we can many different activities other than just swimming. We can watch movies; but you would have to bring whatever movie you want to watch. While watching it, we can eat popcorn, and still discussing about the homework, if you want to, but I don’t the others would like to. There will be a lot of people hang out with us, don’t worry, I wouldn’t invite you if there are just you and me. After that, we can hangout for a little bit, go shopping for a little bit at Parkson Hung Vuong. Or we will just go around the city, it will be fun.
My mom will cook for us food at lunch; she’ll cook healthy foods that I bet you would love to eat. And you can choose where we’ll be eating dinner, if you guys will be staying that late. We can eat KFC, Lotteria… Whatever you want. Then we can go back to my house and continue our homework. When we finished all of that homework, we can watch some more movies and of course with popcorn.
You can choose to go or not to, but I’m telling you, this will be fun, I’m excited about it. You can go home any time you want, but you wouldn’t want to miss all the fun, right???? Hope to see you there.
Love,
Jessica

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Hamadi Vocabulary

  1. Tedious - To me, the church is a very tedious place, I always get sleepy during masses.
  2. Archaic - My grandma's house is very archaic, she likes to use old stuffs from many years ago.
  3. Vaguely - Sometimes I vaguely present something to my classmates and they couldn't understand what I said.
  4. Inquiring - I like to inquiring my dad about the world around us so I can understand more about it.

Tuesday, September 14, 2010

The Monkey's Paw & Aunty Misery Vocabular

  1. Amiably -Lionel Messi and Cristiano Ronaldo are amiably playing a soccer game
  2. Presumptuous - She was too presumptuous about her score
  3. Credulity - I was ashamed at my own credulity for believing everything on the Internet
  4. Hospitality - I was very grateful at their hospitality
  5. Gnarled - My grandma is now a very gnarled woman

Tuesday, September 7, 2010

The Treasure of Lemon Brown Vocabular

  1. Impromptu: Yesterday, my teacher had an impromptu quiz for our class and it was so hard that the whole class started to hate her.
  2. Tentatively: I typed tentatively because I didn't know what to say to my friend
  3. Intently: I looked intently at the horrible scene in the theater 
  4. Probing: I'm probing for the answer for my quiz by looking at Alex's paper
  5. Ominous: I hate the movie, it was an ominous movie